Feedback on narrative

Feed back on our narrative

After we presented our pitch, we were given feedback by our class mates and our teacher about what they liked and what could do with changing. There were some positive and negative comments based on our narrative. Firstly, the narrative got a positive view from our class mates. They liked the structure of it and the idea of a killer returning to where he once lived to wreak havoc. The majority of the class said they liked the idea of the film trailer being based 15 years later when the killer breaks out from a psychotic institution.
They said to make it better; there opinion was that there should be more dialogue and more blood and gore involved to make it sound more like a horror slasher film, and not a thriller. The locations got a positive review because they have the right characteristics to host a horror film and you see them in near enough every horror film you watch as they play an integral part in making the film as scary as possible.
To conclude, we have taken board the advice and ideas that we were given and have therefore made changes to our horror film trailer idea to make it as good as possible. Our narrative will now include more witnesses and there will be more blood and gore shown to make it sound as good as possible.